$300.00 USD

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First Ten Pages Critique

The first ten pages of your manuscript need to dazzle your readers. Let’s make sure they’re irresistible!

Here’s how it works:

  • Submit the first ten pages of your book in standard manuscript format (Microsoft Word, double-spaced, 12 point Times Roman or equivalent font, one inch margins all around). This will likely total 2800 – 3000 words. If it’s more than that, please double-check your formatting. 
  • You will receive a marked-up manuscript as well as a brief editorial letter summarizing my feedback.
  • We’ll schedule a 30 minute Zoom call to discuss my notes and answer all your questions.
  • Our Zoom session can be recorded upon request. You’ll be provided with a link to download the recording (video or audio, your preference), which will expire after 30 days.

HEADS UP! After you complete your purchase, check your inbox for a confirmation email that includes the link to submit your pages. If you’re not ready to submit them just yet, no worries! Just send me an email and we'll set a submission deadline that works for you. 

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