$2,000.00 USD

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Manuscript Critique (<80K words)

If your complete draft is ready for fresh eyes and expert feedback, a full manuscript read and critique can be the key to achieving a truly transformative revision.

NOTE: If your manuscript is longer than 80K words, there will be an additional charge. Send us an email that includes the word count of your manuscript and we’ll get you to the right checkout option.

I’ll provide feedback on:

  • the overall story structure, including pacing, stakes, character arcs, and any weaknesses in the plot.
  • any writing craft issues in evidence, including issues with voice, POV, compression, vividness, and clarity.
  • any particular concerns you may have expressed about the work’s subject matter, themes, and reader appeal

A 30 minute one-on-one Zoom session to review notes and answer questions is included.

You’ll get a marked-up copy of your manuscript returned to you, along with an editorial letter that offers targeted, actionable feedback on your work. 

Once you’ve had a chance to review my notes, we’ll schedule a 30 minute session on Zoom to discuss any questions you have. If you like, this session will be recorded and you’ll be given a link to access and download the recording.

After you complete your purchase, I’ll be in touch to schedule your manuscript submission and our follow-up call. 

Yours in storytelling,

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