If your completed draft is ready for fresh eyes and expert feedback, congratulations! That’s a big accomplishment.

A manuscript critique will show you exactly how to approach your revisions and what your next steps should be.

 I’ll provide detailed feedback on:

• the overall story structure, including pacing, stakes, character arcs, and any weak spots in the plot.
  
• writing craft, including any issues with voice, POV, compression, vividness, and clarity.
• any other particular concerns you may have about the work’s subject matter, themes, and reader appeal

A 50 minute one-on-one Zoom session to review my feedback and answer questions is included.

You’ll get a marked-up copy of your manuscript returned to you, along with an editorial letter that offers targeted, actionable feedback on your work. 

Once you’ve had a chance to review my notes, we’ll schedule a 50 minute session on Zoom to discuss any questions you have. If you like, this session will be recorded and you’ll be given a link to access and download the recording.

HEADS UP! After you complete your purchase, check your inbox for a confirmation email that includes the link to submit your pages. If you’re not ready to submit them just yet, no worries! Just send me an email and we'll come up with a timeframe that works for you. 

When checking out, please tick the box that gives permission to email you in order to receive this and other important notifications.

Yours in storytelling,
Maryrose

If your manuscript is longer than 80K words, there may be an additional charge. Send me an email that includes the word count of your manuscript and we’ll get you to the right checkout option.

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